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[Crazy Console Battles!]

Nice!

Graphics- The graphics were well done. But there was a detail you forgot to put on the PS2 controller. You forgot to put the triangle, circle, X, and the square on the buttons. But I guess that really doesn't matter. Overall, nice job on the graphics.

Style- The style was good also. Although this might not be considered to be very "original", you still did a great job on animating the controllers and such.

Sound- The sound was executed very well also. Every move a controller made matched the sound you had selected to correspond to it. NIce job on that too.

Violence- Well there was violence. So I guess there is nothing to describe here.

Interactivity- Interactiviy was on here also. You made this flash even better by allowing the viewer to choose who would be the victor and of course, by imputing easter eggs. Great job.

Humor- It was funny when the Gamecube controller appeared and really didn't do anything, and then was taken away. The Xbox and PS2 controller then continued to fight like it never appeared.

Overall- You did a very good job on this movie. The only thing I could tell you to further improve the greatness to this flash is to make it a little more longer. That would be the only flaw here. Other than that, nice job and keep up the good work!

ryguypie responds:

I didn't forget to put the symbols on the buttons I just chose not to. I thought it was pretty original, the battle thing has been done many times but I think the concept of console controllers was pretty original. Thanks for the great review :)

[Good~Will Kitty - Smoking]

Good

Graphics- The graphics were the best feature to this movie. The background looked really nice.

Style- I have never seen a good willed kitty telling people not to smoke in a flash before, so I guess you have a nice style going on here.

Sound- There wasn't really much sound in this movie, except for a bird squawking every now and then and of course, the song at the end. Next time, try adding more sounds. (I understand you made this in one night, so I'm not marking you down that much points off this category.)

Violence- The kitty lighting up on fire is considered as violence I guess...

Interactivity- There wasn't any.

Humor- Well, maybe it's me, but I didn't find this movie to be funny.

Overall- Many people seemed to like this video, and some want it to be a series. My opinion: Go right on ahead. You have the capability of doing many great flashes in the future, just with a little more practice and time. Good luck on your future submissions.

KraakenHex responds:

Thank you for your well thought out critic. I definately like you.

[Joe escapes evil stuff.]

Great!

Let me describe in detail.

Graphics- The graphics can use some work overall, but they are fairly decent.

Style- I guess your style differs from other people's. "Joe escapes evil stuff" "Evil Coathangers" Never seen anyone use those as titles or evil enemies.

Sound- The sound was ok providing that the music fitted the flash nicely.

Violence- This movie had its "portion" of violence nevertheless.

Interactivity- None

Humor- Having a little guy escape evil stuff is actually funny. The ending is as well, as other reviewers have indicated.

Overall- This was a neat flash. But I would suggest working on the graphics a little bit more and make it a tad longer. The characters' movement were great, so I don't think that needs improvement. Hope to see Joe escaping evil again soon!

Greyfox999 responds:

Thanks for the Review :)
I do try to take the things people tell me on board. I appreciate you putting the time in to give a lengthy and constructive review :)
Thanks again,
Greyfox

[TooF Bad Breath]

Nice

This entry was great, so I'll describe it in detail.

Graphics- The Graphics could be better but they still were good. If you could have added shading to the teeth, it would have been much better. But nonetheless, they were ok.

Style- This flash is unique. I have never seen teeth farting before in a flash so it's quite original. Nice job.

Sound- The sound is what makes this flash great. The voices used for the teeth and the tongue were very well suitable to the characters. I believe that if you would have included different voices or not have any at all, it wouldn't be as great as it is.

Violence- There wasn't any.

Interactivity- There wasn't any

Humor- It was sort of funny in the way the other tooth smelled it and gave this long description of the smell saying the same stuff. And his eye was twitching also, which made it even funnier. (Although I practically didn't get the Metal Gear joke at the end. Dunno, maybe it's me.)

Overall- Nice job on this. Many people seem to want "Toof2" so, go for it. You have the skills to do another one, why not do it? Good luck on your next entry, and don't give up!

MACception responds:

Thanks for the detail :P I was going to shade the teeth, but, I guess it never came to be. We'll see about it on the next one.
Thanks dude, glad you liked it.