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The style was profoundly one of the best features in the work. The characters were magnificently well drawn and animated. The abstract backgrounds and creatures suited Zekey's theme brilliantly. Each creatures' unique rendered style and movement provided an abundance of stylistic innovation to the overall feeling of the flash. This is one of those films in which a plot isn't needed in order to appreciate its brilliance.
I'm glad you liked it enough to write such a good review :)
Decent Work
You did a nice job on this but there is room for improvement. The graphics were interesting to watch but if you would try to draw the birds less "crooked", and more smoother, they would look much better. I understand the trees and the landscape were drawn in the form of a crooked state, which truly shows your style. The style was great. I like the drawings of the trees and of the landscape. You did a great job on that. The music fitted the animation very nicely and there aren't any flaws with it. It would have been better though if you would have added some kind of sound effects. For example, you could have added a sound effect that would convey birds chirping, etc. There also wasn't a plot of some kind, and if there was, sorry if I missed it. Overall, you did a nice job on this submission, just try to polish up more you characters, not the backgrounds, becuase they look great but the characters so that they would look more smoother and not in the state of a person who drew them very quickly, work more on length, and add sound effects. Keep working and spiffen up you animation skills and I hope to see more from you. Good luck on your future submissions.
Summary Points: Good graphics, try to polish up your characters, Very Nice Style, although there wasn't a plot to go with, Great Music but there was a lack of sound effects, quite short but well animated.
What a review! I will be refuring back to this everytime a start a new peice of work, Its easy to understand your points, thanks alot!
Nice
You did a pretty good job on this, but there is room improvements that would make this submission even better. The graphics, or characters, were nicely drawn. But what could have made them look more polished would be using the shading technique. If you would have shaded the characters, they would have looked more smooth and of better quality. The Style was pretty good. I liked the storyline you had of the Uzi Union hijacking the headquarters of the Sun Mafia. The music fitted the animation nicely, but there was a lack of sound effects. It would have been great if you would have added gunshot sound effects and some kind of sound that would had conveyed an explosion. The violence or the blood was animated well but it would have been better if you would have drawn or included a wound of some kind that would have portrayed a gunshot wound of some kind. It would have also been great if you would have made the movie more longer or made the scene of the battle more extensive. Overall, you did a pretty good job on this but next time try polishing more your graphics, include sound effects, if it is a violence film and it requires people shooting each other, try adding in some kind of wound when they get shot, if you do all of this, you will have a much more polished animation. Good luck on your future sumissions.
Summary Points: Average Graphics, Nice Style, Good selection of music but there was a lack of sound effects, nicely animated violence or blood sequences but there was a lack of a gun wound of some kind, fairly short but nicely animated overall.
yeah, it was short cuz it was an overnight job, you make some good points. I didn't add sfx cuz it was kinda a music video.
Nice!
You have greatly improved upon from the time you joined the Sunday Comics and Toons Collab. Ahh, the good old days... Anyway, let's get to the review. You did a pretty good job on this, but there is room for improvement. The graphics, or characters need some working on. Shake could have been added more upon. What I mean is that you could have shaded him and added more details to him. For example, the straw on top of his head was just a stick. Try drawing out the straw and add those thick red and white lines so that it would look much more realistic and would even enhance the character's overall look. Another detail or improvement you could have added was making the characters, especially the characters that were talking, blink. It would have looked great and made the characters look more realistic. Unless, if in the real episode, they didn't blink, then I guess it was ok you left them without blinking. The sound, or in other words, the sound clip from the acutal episode was of good quality and there really wasn't any problem with it. The feature that was really good in your animation was the lip synching. You did a great job on making the lip syncing accurate and it looked really nice on the characters animation wise. Overall next time, work on the graphics or characters a little bit more (The background looked nice by the way), if chances permit try to make it a little bit longer and you'll be much better off. Very nice job on this and keep up the great work!
Summary Points: Average graphics, can be improved upon, Nice Style, Nice crystal clear sound, very great lip synching techniques.
LOL the characters were drawn as they are in the show, the scene features a less graphic intensivnessissity to it. Its more of a lip sync test, If your in need of practisiing lip syncing yourself I highly suggest using this clip because of the range of speed in the voices. Thanks for the review.
Very Original!
This was great! You did a very good job on this. The graphics were great, and were very smoothly animated. You said in your comments that you were going to color them later, but I think the graphics look great as they are. Without color, they look oldish and it adds to your style. In my opinion, you should leave them as they are because to me, they look much better this way. The voice overs were great as well. They sounded professional and suited the characters nicely as well. I also found it to be pretty amusing. Nice job with the original characters and amusing storyline. I believe this will be a great series, and keep up the awesome work.
Summary Points: Good graphics and wonderfully animated, Awesome style, Great storyline and plot, Magnificent voices and highly amusing.
Thanks for such a great review. It seems so far from what I have seen that I am getting a positive response to the black and white, so maybe I will leave it that way. Once again, thank you very much, I appreciate your review.
Nice Job
As you said in your comments, it is really short. But it was made rather well. The graphics were drawn and animated well. I liked the snow effect you had here, it looked nice. Although "Santa" was blurred, he was still drawn well. It was nice you blurred him too. I found this to be quite original, because I have never seen Santa look like the way he looked. The music at the start of the animation was nice, since it fitted the theme of Christmas, but the selection of music at the end of the animation was horrible. What does that music have anything to do with Christmas? Was it because the demon-like Santa scard the boy? If that's the case, then I can understand why you chose it but in my opinion it would have been better if you had put a Christmas song instead. Overall, as you said in your comments as well, this was a nice animation considering it was done in two days. Keep up the good work, and good luck on your future submissons.
Summary Points: Good Graphics, Nice Style, Good first selection of music but last song was a bit too random for me, Nice joke/storyline, very short but animatied well.
This has to be the best review i've ever gotten for one of my movies. Your well thought out review makes my holliday complete, and yes it was because santa was kinda demonic, for some reason I had to go with thriller, it was like calling me. In any case I thank you for your review and have a happy holiday!
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