Nice first Flash
This was a nice first submission. Although it lacked some length and background (In most parts) it was an ok job. Let's start off with the graphics. The drawing of the victim was pretty well drawn. The "Moving backgrounds" were drawn with little detail, and could have been drawn better. An example was when the person reached hell. You could have at least animated the fire. But I understand this is your first flash. The style was pretty good. I liked how the person was being pulled and put into situations along the way in his journey. The music fitted the animation nicely. Although sound effects would have been nice. There wasn't any violence. There technically wasn't any interactivity either. I don't think this submisson was made for humor as well. Overall, this was a nice first flash and with a little bit more practice, you can get way better. Good luck with your future submissions.